P.F.T.T. V1

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NOVAS ROOM

Cups full of Patron I need to sober up and go home I been in this bar for too long every drink getting too strong I got this one number in my phone that I really wanna call up but lately I been really fukin up and word is she happy with this new guy
but I been drinking so much that I’mma hit her up like fuk that dude he can’t compete with the past I know you miss the times we had I SAID fuk that dude he’s definitely not me and since you picked up I feel like my chances 50/50

I’m just saying I thought you ain’t like pretty dudes tell me I’m lying and I’ll skip straight to the interlude I’m just saying I didn’t think that was your type and I’mma roast him only if you make me aight

Cups of that goose got me on the loose see her whole crew ask about you they said you had something to do what you doing that’s so important lemme find out pretty boy got you out courtin

I’m so ripped that I’mma call you anyway and say fuk that dude he can’t compete with the past I know you miss the times we had I SAID fuk that dude he’s definitely not me and since you picked up I feel like my chances 50/50

I think I’m addicted to that new to hear the new sound and what the face look like too I know it sound like a dirt bag and I would agree with you we threw a party yeah a kickback broads came over but they already left yeah we threw a kickback talk to me I need you in my life I need you to make things right I had some women that were living off me seeing as how you know one I won’t mention the three

too many drinks have been given to me after a while babe they all sound the same I’m sorry I made you a player in this game I’ve had sex five times this week if you want I’ll explain having a hard time readjusting to the game they wanna go like rabbits it’s insane
it’s Friday night I called talking crazy I’m lucky you answered you can be lazy I’ll do all the work I’m trying to get under that shirt oh I’m sorry I’m tryna see if you down to choose pretty boy should know the rules
Oh Word you not gonna come word guess I’mma Netflix and reflect

DESTINIES BIGGEST FAN

DEAR MRS IM TOO GOOD TO ANSWER OR CALL MY FANS, THIS WILL BE THE LAST INBOX THAT ILL EVER SEND YOUR ASS, ITS BEEN 6 YEARS AND STILL NO WORD YEAH TIME TO DEAD IT, I KNOW YOU SAW MY LAST 3 MESSAGES, YOU READ IT, SO THIS IS THE VIDEO IM SENDING OUT TO YOU I HOPE YOU CRY HEY DESTINY I TOOK 43 PERCS IM ON THE HIGHWAY DOING 143 YOU THINK I’LL DIE, YOU KNOW THAT EPISODE OF POWER WHEN OL BOY COULD HAVE KEPT HIS SISTER FROM GETTING KILLED BUT HE DIDN’T, IT’S KINDA LIKE THAT CUZ YOU COULD HAVE PREVENTED THIS TOO BUT YOU DIDN’T NO BULLSHITTIN, BUT ITS TOO LATE CUZ NOW IM GETTING DROWSY RIGHT , AND ALL I WANTED WAS A COMMENT OR A LOUSEY LIKE, YOU KNOW I DELETED ALL YOUR PICTURES AND URL’S OF MY PHONE GIRL, I LOVE YOU DESTINY WE WOULDA BEEN HAPPY THINK ABOUT IT WE COULD HAVE HAD THE WORLD , YOU RUINED IT NOW, I HOPE YOU CRY AND YOU CANT BREATH ABOUT IT, I HOPE YOU GASP FOR AIR AND YOU HYPERVENTILATE PASS OUT AND HAVE NIGHTMARES ABOUT IT, OH SHIT I FORGOT MY PHONE OFF HOW AM I SUPPOSED TO SEND THIS SHIT OUT, damn I’m going the wrong way down a one way route

My cigarette went out I’m wondering why I.. smoke at all
My vape clouds up my window..
and I can’t see at all and even if I could I’d still be me, but the likes on my phone they remind me, y’all love me and I’m not all alone

So I’ll take one of my favorite songs and flip it to fit me for practice 🤷🏾‍♂️

MENTAL HEALTH

When I die fuk it I wanna go to hell, Cee nova a piece of shit it hard to fukin tell, it don’t make sense goin to heaven with the lame-oids, fuk that shit I’m in line with all my homeboys, I’m getting tired with life here on earth and it only got worse, with my son birth, he 16 months ain’t seen him since 5, and his other creator upset because I’m still alive, (spinning of revolver click) she held me down whole time In the bing, I got released & started hitting everything, all of my life I been considered as the worse, momma goin to sleep had to hide her fukin purse, pops won’t there because I thought he didn’t care, the day before he died he looked me in my eyes, did some research pops won’t a jerk, history repeats itself, same way it happened to him in the past I’m getting put on a shelf , (spinning of revolver click) the walls of my empire falling apart everywhere I look, I gotta go see the judge I wanna end the book(CEE TALK TO ME PLEASE) it’s sort of like Willie Dynamite at the end, walking down the street with no fukin friends, everybody say pray, and I just say ok, but what’s the sense in that when I’ma end it all today, anything you can salvage from my estate go to my son, tell him daddy loved him even though he don’t know me haven’t held him since day one, I’m sick of all the broads lying I’m sick of dudes hating.. Matter of fact, why the fuk I’m waiting(spinning of revolver bang)
MENTAL HEALTH IS A SERIOUS ISSUE IN THE AFRICAN AMERICAN COMMUNITY. I WROTE THIS IN PROBABLY ABOUT 2012. LUCKILY THIS IS JUST A INTERPOLATION OF THE LATE GREAT NOTORIOUS B.I.G. SUICIDAL THOUGHTS. I WAS THERE IF I COULD RELATE ENOUGH TO WRITE THIS. REMEMBER GOD COMES TO PICK YOU UP WHEN HE NEEDS YOU DON’T HAVE TO CATCH A RIDE. BEFORE YOU CALL THAT RIDE CALL THIS NUMBER FOR A BETTER RIDE
1-800-273-8255

MURDER SHE PROVOKE

Lickwood means rewind gunshot means forward you requested it so we rewind SELECTOR COME WIT IT

Now this one dedicated to the girl with the Angel face & broken heart
Step up my youth hear this

I know this little girl her name is Red
Her beauty is like Hellen of Troy
But If I ever tell you about Red
You’ll just say I don’t know what I know (but)
Many heart she break (buck buck)
Many heart she break(nah nah nah)
Many heart she break
Many heart she a break
A pretty face & pain up top
She want a real love but rude boy won’t stop (follow me)
A pretty face & pain up top
She want a real love but rude boy won’t stop
Say, gyal you’re pretty your face pretty but ya body it temp me it temp me it pull out the pimp in me pimp in me (lawd)
That dress is flirty flirty make Rasta wanna do something dirty dirty
Tell ya boyfriend sorry sorry sorry (come now)
She be in the corner where she gyrate & wind
She know about the lines & games boty man use Everytime the wickedest kinda girl when you cross her line but she back it pon me Everytime

I know this little girl her name is Red
Her beauty is like Hellen of Troy
If I ever tell you about Red
You’ll just say I don’t know what I know (but)
Many heart she break (buck buck)
Many heart she break
Many heart she break(yes lawd)
Many heart she break

Watch her stand still you no pay her light bill
If you test Red baby you might get killed
Go a shotta you can borrow
Let his momma pussy worry bout him tomorrow
Now every middle of the year our anniversary is here
& Just the other day she said she 6 Month with child
First time since old earth died that the rude boy heart smiled

EXCUSE ME

Girl me never know girl me never know pon that beautiful mind where it go
Waoh woa (follow me)

The girl could worship pure vanity but that would make her pure insanity but them eyes tell me she ready ready right there gal steady steady (lawd)