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Iron lungs; no mesothelioma, if you try to keep up I’ll put your ass in a coma,/ those crystals aren’t Swarovski, might as well be as much as shit cost me,/ inhale the past then you exhale your future, if you want a shotgun you know damn well ya boy will shoot you,/ chain smoke and I pass to my got damn self no chain broke cause I pass to my got damn self, /hashish and indica I am so into ya, /this ain’t gas baby this is rocket fuel, yeah I know I’m radical cool totally awesome dude, /this came from Jesus H Christ out the ground got me nice,/ I say it twice Jesus H Christ he got me nice,/ I’m a cannon rolling, torch holding son of a God, /real life no facade, you me and Mary Minaj, /so much smoke I can’t see your face like a hijab, /assalamualaikum all those problems I PROMISE she’ll erase em
Hear ye hear ye raise your glass for I’m comfortable with the monster I had to be for he inspired you to become everything you were meant to be from that extra motivation to the pep in your step you hate the fact you cant tarnish his rep
It’s the fire in those eyes that light every word I surmise it’s the fury that moves these hands its the way your voice demands do you understand yet ? you won the bet
You tamed Frankenstein but you’re looking for another monster you’ll never find another of this kind you’re only frustrating yourself and waisting your time all the drastic changes from the hair to wardrobe rearranges that’s ya boy the revamps face beat trying to come at the champ on repeat
So alright I’mma be honest I’m mad at myself because I miss your ass you give the worse heads up you said the time before that was the last YEP I’m putting that on the record communication is key especially when dealing with a wrecker
you and these words are what drive my passion now she ask one word how?
well I think the circumstances been good and bad if you would have stayed around I ran the risk of not knowing what I had plus I didn’t cheat as much as you probably think I did I really doubt it name five females I slid out wit see now you pouting
master manipulator she mumble under her voice I wish she looked at things different but I don’t think I give her much choice I really think it’s the scene we met on that brings most of the problems home everybody knows everybody and nobody’s ever alone
what they saw that could have been my sister cousin or a random person at the bar but you believe a person looking from afar when I know it’s gps on the car
I can tell you been crying lately drinking more than you used to getting that body right for the summer I see you I know you gonna hate this one when you read it because you know it’s true true …
May the Angels hover over your soul may these words be motivation when you’re cold I still pray for a better tomorrow and I’ve seen the heart you have to borrow
I been waiting on this my whole life I wonder will it hurt like a cut from a knife or will it be serene and tranquil I just hope I leave a bank full think Scrooge McDuck and The money pit I don’t want my bloodline to have to kneel for shit not even a little bit
Seven streams of income is my initial goal and I’m only buying bars the next time I buy gold market value do your research that could be the difference between a house and no shirt
diversify diversify diversify keep your portfolio flipping like it’s a drought and you have birds in the kitchen when you can see the trends coming roll the dice but don’t risk too much because you might have to roll twice if you feel it in your gut than double down and before you go you might own a town
Something’s wrong, I hold my head, Scrap gone, our homey dead, I smacked my girl, she called the Feds, went to court, I spent that bread, I’m headin home, get to the door, key don’t work, ain’t home no more, to my surprise, she TRYNA REPLACE ME !! summa cum laude, Viking university , ALL OF THE LIGHTS , muzzle flash, car crash, flashlights, foot chase, holster race, ER lights, I’m aight, but should have died tonight ALL OF THE LIGHTS, public visitation, we met at a mall, said I smell like smoke, and she walked off, told her she take me back, I won’t cheat no more, restraining order, she hard core, I can’t see my kid, they over one, go to court, get jacked son, she pistol whipped me without a gun, baby please, babies need their Daddy’s, and half them women lying they ain’t never had me, ALL OF THE LIGHTS, muzzle flash, car crash, flashlights, foot chase, holster race, ER lights, I’m aight, but should have died tonight, ALL OF THE LIGHTS
DEAR MRS IM TOO GOOD TO ANSWER OR CALL MY FANS, THIS WILL BE THE LAST INBOX THAT ILL EVER SEND YOUR ASS, ITS BEEN 6 YEARS AND STILL NO WORD YEAH TIME TO DEAD IT, I KNOW YOU SAW MY LAST 3 MESSAGES, YOU READ IT, SO THIS IS THE VIDEO IM SENDING OUT TO YOU I HOPE YOU CRY HEY DESTINY I TOOK 43 PERCS IM ON THE HIGHWAY DOING 143 YOU THINK I’LL DIE, YOU KNOW THAT EPISODE OF POWER WHEN OL BOY COULD HAVE KEPT HIS SISTER FROM GETTING KILLED BUT HE DIDN’T, IT’S KINDA LIKE THAT CUZ YOU COULD HAVE PREVENTED THIS TOO BUT YOU DIDN’T NO BULLSHITTIN, BUT ITS TOO LATE CUZ NOW IM GETTING DROWSY RIGHT , AND ALL I WANTED WAS A COMMENT OR A LOUSEY LIKE, YOU KNOW I DELETED ALL YOUR PICTURES AND URL’S OF MY PHONE GIRL, I LOVE YOU DESTINY WE WOULDA BEEN HAPPY THINK ABOUT IT WE COULD HAVE HAD THE WORLD , YOU RUINED IT NOW, I HOPE YOU CRY AND YOU CANT BREATH ABOUT IT, I HOPE YOU GASP FOR AIR AND YOU HYPERVENTILATE PASS OUT AND HAVE NIGHTMARES ABOUT IT, OH SHIT I FORGOT MY PHONE OFF HOW AM I SUPPOSED TO SEND THIS SHIT OUT, damn I’m going the wrong way down a one way route
My cigarette went out I’m wondering why I.. smoke at all
My vape clouds up my window..
and I can’t see at all and even if I could I’d still be me, but the likes on my phone they remind me, y’all love me and I’m not all alone
So I’ll take one of my favorite songs and flip it to fit me for practice 🤷🏾♂️
I have a stalker that I love, I should be in church but I’m in the club, I think the attention is like a drug to my self confidence, yeah I know that’s supposed to be autonomous, whenever I need to feel love or get lost in the moment, I know you are down because you’re my biggest proponent, I act like I’m not interested to see how far you let me take it, then you turn on the charm and to myself I say might don’t make it, once again I wake up next to my number one fan, it’s been seven years & don’t ask me because I still don’t understand, maybe I don’t have a stalker I’m just seeing competitive spirit, or maybe I’m in a relationship but refuse to endear it

IM THINKING EVERY WRITER FEELS LIKE THIS BUT SOMETIMES YOU GOTTA LET EM KNOW ✍🏾✍🏾✍🏾
